Today the wind is blowing so fast,
That I can remember the Memories of my past
I can feel the moisture of Your tears in the Air
I can feel the Fragnance of Your body here & there
All these sparkling stars in the Sky
Make Me to remember
The Serenity of Your Eyes
As the Wind kisses My Cheeks
I can remember
The Softness of Your lips
As these black clouds are Wandering without Fear
It's natural for Me
To image them as Your untied Hair
All these beautiful things make to feel that
I am not Alone
Somebody is always besides Me to shape My SOUL!!!
6 comments:
This poem is also great like last one. Nobody can say that u r not a professional poet.
Now I know very well that you are/were in love and love that guy too much. But one advice, if now he is not in your life then please try to forget him. If you are trying to remember each and every moment which you spent with him, then this life is very tough for you.
And if he is still in your life then he is very lucky... i.e. only because of your true love.. :)
But I really appreciate your poem. :)
superb.bahut sundar...aapki english to adbhut hai,vaise aap hindi ki bhi badi coll poetess ban sakti hai......yehi darshaane ke liye maine aapke in vichaaro ko hindi mein likha hai......aapki hi poem hai,bataiyega,kaisi hai......:)
आज इन हवाओं में कुछ ऐसी गति है,
कि इनमे नज़र आती मेरे अतीत की प्रगति है,
हवाओं में तेरे
आँसूओं की नमी महसूस होती है,
तेरे बदन की खुश्बू यहीं कहीं महसूस होती है,
आकाश के ये चमकते सितारे याद दिलाते है तेरे आँखों की शांत चंचलता,
जब हवा सहला जाती है मेरे गालो को,मुझे याद आती है तेरे होंठो की कोमलता,
ये निर्भीक काले बादल स्वभाविक रूप से तेरे खुले बालों कि भाँति नज़र आते है,
ये खूबसूरती का 'आलम' कराता है एहसास,की मैं अकेली नही हूँ,कोई हमेशा है पास,और जो मेरी आत्मा को नये आयाम,नये मायने दे रहा है
thanxs Sajal Ji
aapka hindi anuvaad to meri original poem se bhi achcha hai
i stand nowhere in your comparision in this field
aisa na kahe.......ur work was superb...shayad isiliye iska anuvaad bhi achha lag raha hai
I thought that I will pick best lines of this poems and will comment that i liked these lines best. but, I couldnt find it. 'coz I like every word of it. Feels like if I'll select some words then it will be unjustice with rest of them. very poetic and imaginative.
untitled is better than giving a false name to it...I wonder how much of this was actually felt and written
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